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Is it just me or is the writing on this page distractingly bad? Who approved this paragraph?

You don’t need to raise your wrist or touch the screen to see the time or other information and complications on your watch face, because the display is always on. And now it’s 70% brighter indoors when your wrist is down.



What’s wrong with it?


It’s poorly written and a borderline run-on sentence. It sounds like it was written by a non-native speaker of English.




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