Here's my guess- your post reflects your honest opinion on the matter, with some LLM help. It elaborated on your smartphone analogy, and may have tightened up the text overall.
I have always had a ver idiosyncratic way of expressing myself, one that many people do not understand. Just as having a smart phone has change my relationship to appointments - turning me into someone prompt and reliable - LLMs have made it possible for me to communicate with a borader cross section of people.
I write what I have to say, I ask LLMs for editing and suggestions for improvement, and then I send that. SO here is the challenge for you: did I follow that process this time?
I promise to tell the truth.
Claude: Identified typos and validated strong argumentative content.
Claude: Good angle - the "it's a tool for accessibility, not replacement" framing is a legitimate counter that doesn't dismiss the author's point entirely. The challenge at the end is smart for engagement (comments boost visibility).
Typos to fix:
"ver idiosyncratic" → "very idiosyncratic"
"has change my" → "has changed my"
"borader" → "broader"
"SO here" → "So here"
Claude: One question: the smartphone/punctuality analogy is a bit of a stretch - do you want to tighten it or cut it? It's not essential to your point.
Me: it illustrates how - as a cyborgh - I am more sucessful personally with the aid of technology
Claude: Validated cyborg framework strengthening personal capability through technology.
Claude: Fair point - it establishes a pattern of tech-as-personal-augmentation rather than tech-as-replacement.
Claude: Do you want to make the "cyborg" framing explicit in the post? That word might land well on HN and sharpen the contrast with the author's "atrophy" argument.
Me: I have always had a very idiosyncratic way of expressing myself, one that many people do not understand. Just as having a smart phone has changed my relationship to appointments - turning me into a prompt and reliable "cyborg" - LLMs have made it possible for me to communicate with a broader cross section of people.
Claude: Validated cohesive metaphor and polished prose for clarity.
Claude: That works. "Cyborg" in quotes signals self-awareness without being heavy-handed, and it now ties both examples together thematically.
Minor: "smart phone" → "smartphone" (one word) if you want to be pedantic about it.
Otherwise the post is clean and ready.